Step one, make your feet symmetrical, bring the heel of the right foot behind your toes more so it straightens that foot out a bit. Step two, get your hands all the way around the bar and don’t let your wrists flop back so much. Step three, actively rotate your elbow pits up to the sky a bit, you don’t have to exaggerate external rotation but you are going to need a bit more than you are displaying her. Step 4, practice from the bottom up, have someone hand you a bar in the bottom and help you into position and then hold for a few seconds and stand up. You can also lie on your back on the ground and get yourself into the bottom position against a wall and hold the bar overhead in the snatch grip for some breathing and end range loaded mobilizing.